T2+Explain

Thursday 19 May 2011  How to Get a week off of School? To get a full week off of school you will need to have parents that adore you and have a teacher that considers you as his or her son or daughter and they will trust you and believe you. If you succeed at getting a week off of school you should really consider becoming an actor or actress because you are a natural at faking things or pretending.

You first will need to have a history of being sick therefore it will make your sickness more realistic to your parents. If you have a brother or sister you will need to love and cherish them. You will of never hit or hurt their feelings or they’ll say something like “Your just faking it or your not sick, why can’t you believe us mum and dad.” After that they will do a puppy face and then you parents will investigate you and you’ll be busted. Then your brother or sister or both will laugh at you and your parents will never trust you or believe what you say. Be very careful of what you do because one false move could ruin your life! Whatever you do don’t say to your parents I think I have a fever otherwise they will take your temperature and you’ll be in trouble.

Most of what you do to get a week off of school is when you are at school because if your bad your teacher and other teachers will think that you can’t be trusted, but if you are good but not perfect at school, your teacher will gain your trust. Although if you have friends you will not be able to tell them that your planning it because it will spread around because kid’s will think that your awesome. Before you know it there will be a call from your school saying that you’ve been planning it and your a fake and a phony so keep a secret. If there is anyone at your school that hates you they find out at school that your away they will spread a secret to the whole school and as a result of this you will be bullied and teased, so don’t have any enemies.

Nicholas: Excellent explanation but maybe you need to read through it again and make some changes. There were some spots where it didn't really make any sense.

**MY LEARNING TARGETS**

My next step in writing is to proof read and edit my writing carefully. Be careful to not have run on sentences.

 I will achieve this by re reading my writing out loud to see if it makes sense. Check sentences to see if I have used a variety of simple, compound & complex, if it sounds like rambling reword the sentence.

 Date achieved: //Mrs Stock//

**Kyle you have written a number of explanations so far. You clearly understand about writing a general statement, using present tense and have used a variety of sentence structures. Focus on deliberately using a variety of sentences as outlined in the above target.**

Wednesday 18 May 2011

How to get out of doing Homework?

There are many ways of getting out of homework. Homework is a task or work that your teacher will give you to do at home instead of doing it at school. It is very hard to get out of doing homework for a long term but it is possible.

The easiest way to get out of doing homework, first depends on if your teacher is a man or a woman. If your teacher is a women you will first have to be really polite and nice to people not only in your class but in the school and family, by doing this the teacher will believe that you will complete your work on time. Some more way’s you could do this is by sitting up and alway’s doing your work because and listening to what the teacher say’s and this is a great way to gain the teachers attention. If your teacher is a man you will have to work extra hard because men are alway’s strict on you and don’t like to be beaten by children at anything because they are very competitive. You will have to do things like be the teachers pet, this means doing the teachers dirty work and helping and volunteering to do things for him pretty much like being his slave. Men teachers alway’s like sporty people so you will have to be fit and be good or even great at sport’s because it will lead you to being closer to doing no homework. The next part of getting out of homework is you will have to be the teachers number 1 student and the teacher will have to gain your trust like believe everything you say and give you stuff he wouldn’t trust anyone else with. You must alway’s listen to what he say’s to people therefore you will get out of doing homework for a few day’s but not forever.

To get out of doing homework for a longer period, you will have to work really hard to get out of it but you can act or alway’s be good or be a goody good. But it will work a lot easier if you are a pro at being or doing good things. You will have to do things like sit up do you work and be very good at reading writing and maths, you will have to finish work well before it is expected to be done and then this will lead to you to almost being able to get out of doing homework for a long term. The last couple of things you will need to do to do no homework is you will need to have a sense of humour and be funny and the joker in the class but still being respectful to people. You will have to of never ever been in trouble or even been spoken to once by a teacher for doing something you shouldn’t of being doing, do not say swear words, and last of all say please and thank you ever time to someone because it will make people happy and they will respect you and then the teacher will treat you as your son or daughter and not give you any homework!

This may be a lot of stuff to do and you may think that it is a waste of time and easier to just forget about it and just do homework and that is probably the easier way but if you really hate homework you could do this and become a goody good.



__Tuesday 10 may 2011__

<span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; line-height: 19px; margin: 0px;">L.I. We are learning to use words that contain cause & effect. <span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; line-height: 19px; margin: 0px;">S.C. My writing
 * <span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 14px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; line-height: 19px; margin: 0px;">will use words like because, as a result of, therefore

<span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 15px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">What is Rugby?

<span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Rugby is a sport which involves 15 players on each team. Rugby has rules like every other sport and therefore the games are safe for the players on the field. The field is very big and is 100 metres long and fifty metres across. If at or watching rugby you will see rugby posts located at the end of the field in the middle on both sides.

<span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">On the rugby field there are backs and forwards. Their are 8 forwards in rugby. The positions are called prop, hooker, lock, loose forward and a flanker. These positions are all in a what they call a scrum which is a team binded together against another team or the opposition. The rest of the team are the backs so therefore the play at the back behind the forwards, but not always. The backs are made up of the faster people in the team and the kicking group. The first position in the back line is the halfback or number 9 who passes it to the next player who is the first five or number 10 and the number 10 has an important job of kicking penalty goals or a conversion when a try has been scored. Number 11 and 14 are the wingers who play on the outside of the field. Number 12 and 13 and the midfielders and they are the stronger people who run straight into the oppositions defense. The last back line player is number 15 and their job is to stay behind everyone on their team because if the other team kicks the ball behind the other players he can field the ball.

<span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Rugby has rules like every other sport because you need to be in one piece when you come off the field.

I really enjoyed reading this and your writing makes sense and is in present tense. (Ramon)

<span style="color: #000000; font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> <span style="color: #000000; font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;">Kyle I really enjoyed reading this but you started an explanation in the general statement. (Ramon)

<span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">__Wednesday 4 May 2011__

===<span style="font-size: 1.1em; margin: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 5px;">**<span style="font-size: 120%; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">L.I. We are learning to use the structure of explain to give an explanation of what light is and to use present tense. ** === ===<span style="font-size: 1.1em; margin: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 5px;">** <span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 10px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">S.C. My writing ** === <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;"> <span style="font-size: 110%; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">There are two sources of light and the two sources of light is natural light and the other is artificial light and both lights give humans the ability to have eye sight. Light is the fastest traveling thing on earth. Light also can reflect off of different objects but the light only will travel in a strait line but will point a different direction
 * <span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 120%; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">has a general statement at the beginning
 * <span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 120%; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">is sequenced in time order or clearly explains in a logical order
 * <span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 120%; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">is written in present tense

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;"> The two sources of light is natural light and artificial light. Natural light is produced by many different things and the sun produces a lot of light but only 40% of the suns light is visible, there is also many stars which can be seen in the sky at night and the light is very bright even though it is located thousands of kilometers away from earth, Lightning also produces light when it shoot’s a flash out of the sky. Light is the fastest traveling thing on earth. Light travel’s very fast and travel’s about 299,792,458 meters per second and travel’s 186,282 kilometers per second. Light never bends even if you have a torch and you shake up and down or left to right it will always stay in a strait line. You may think that the moon produces it’s own light but the sun actually reflects the light off of the moon and then it creates a light in the night sky.