T2+Novel

__Wednesday 13 July 2011__

Website @http://www.wix.com/kylep410/rimu-novel1

__Wednesday 6 July 2011__

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__Tuesday 5 July 2011__

Reflection:I added some more to our story.

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__Friday 24 June 2011__

Reflection: Today I changed and added some words so it made better sense and is easier to read. I also added speech marks so the reader knows who is speaking and when he or she is speaking.

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__Thursday 23 June 2011__

I added some more sentences onto the story and edited some word's and sentences so it was more interesting to read.

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__Wednesday 22 June 2011__

I corrected some spelling mistakes so it made sense. I also re wrote some sentences so it made better sense and I also wrote some more onto it.

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__Monday 20 June 2011__

I edited and re wrote sentences so it is more interesting and made better sense to read.

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__Friday 17 June 2011__

I have re written some sentences and made them make better sense and also correct some punctuation.

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