T1+Persuade

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can 
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__ Monday 14 March 2011 __

Tauranga Intermediate 30 18 th Avenue Tauranga Extended Morning Tea Dear Mr Diver I think that your idea of an extended morning was a great reward and idea for our good behaviour last Friday. I believe, that an extended morning tea will make a big difference to our school and other schools will start to consider an extended morning tea as well. Wouldn’t you want to have an extended morning tea? You must continue to reward us kids for our good behaviour because, it will help build all of us kid’s fitness and confidence outside the classroom and when we do P.E. I know that In the assemblies every friday afternoon all of us kids will have run around and will be ready for the assembly. Just think, if you were a child again and you weren’t very fit wouldn’t you want extra time to run around to get fitter and healthier? I know that the teachers at Tauranga Intermediate will appreciate having continued extended morning tea’s because, it will help them get organised and they can plan work for us kids for our education. Also teachers can plan school trips for us like the amazing race that Rimu House is participating in, in Week 8. I know that if you reward Tauranga Intermediate with an extended morning tea again we will continue the great behaviour and continue to get back to class before the second bell. I know our good behaviour should be rewarded and continuing to have an extended morning tea will be a great reward. I hope that you will take into consideration to continue having an extended morning tea for our great behaviour outside and inside the classroom.

Yours Sincerely Kyle Parkes